because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other countires have to be trasported for a long distance. To what extent do the advatages outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is undeniable that the modern economy has been influencing many countries worldwide in terms of importing some essential goods for a long distance.
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essay will first discuss both views before elaborating on my perspective. On the one hand, importing a vast amount of
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abroad is considered highly costly for some reasons. As it requires a variety of sophisticated logistic systems and
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manpower, which means that there will be added taxes or charged service. To put it simply, members of society are required to pay
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extra
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for their vital
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, if certain nations rely too much on other
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production, it will result in adverse effects on other domestic business sectors.
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, in Thailand, a wide range of fruits and
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which are imported to Thai markets has been detrimental to small local retailers for several years because tons of Chinese vegetables are considerably cheaper than native ones.
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, imported foreign daily basics are sometimes essential to particular countries when it comes to insufficient supply or incapability to generate. To explain
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, a myriad of nations become more
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on
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others since they have limited sources of main ingredients or components, which leads to a sheer amount of imports each
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, Singapore is constantly in need of
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lands'
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,
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as drinking water, meat, spices and many more.
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, in case of enough supplies, one practical solution is to purchase exotic products from other regions. In conclusion,
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importing goods from overseas is believed to be excessively expensive, in some areas where they are not able to produce their own daily basics should allocate their money
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imported things. I am of opinion that it is worth spending on items or foods that we cannot produce domestically,
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, it will pave the way
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live
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a better standard of living.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global economy
  • international trade
  • comparative advantage
  • carbon footprint
  • economic dependency
  • cultural homogenization
  • sustainable practices
  • transportation emissions
  • accessibility
  • local industries
  • trade fairness
  • economic growth
  • long-distance transport
  • consumer choice
  • cultural diversity
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