More and more tourists and scientists are interested in traveling to remote areas, such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The number of
people
traveling
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to remote
areas
such
as the South Pole is on the increase. In my opinion,
although
there is a problem with
environmental
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pollution in these
areas
,
the
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new
discoveries
can open up endless possibilities.
Thus
, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. One of the disadvantages of increasing
people
going to distant places is the potential for environmental pollution.
People
will create a lot of rubbish.
Furthermore
, some
people
are less environmentally conscious as they leave rubbish in the area.
As a result
,
people
can cause environmental damage to the area,
such
as the death of animals through accidental ingestion of rubbish or plant death through contamination of the soil.
However
, by
traveling
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to these remote
areas
, new
discoveries
may be made which may contribute to the development of human society.
Firstly
, it could help us discover more clean energy sources. The fossil fuels we use now have had many negative effects on the climate,
such
as the global warming effect,
whereas
in recent years some clean energy sources have been discovered in remote
areas
, like the ocean near the South Pole.
Secondly
, it can
also
help us to discover more creatures from which we can learn a lot, just as a small bird can help
people
to create
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aircraft, and more biological
discoveries
can help us to develop
technology
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. In conclusion, the problem of environmental pollution in remote
areas
can be well combated through the creation of policies.
However
, new
discoveries
give human society infinite possibilities,
for example
, a better solving of environmental problems and a new technology to advance human society.
Therefore
I think
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benefits rather than the harms.
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