More and more tourists and scientists are interested in traveling to remote areas, such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The number of

people

traveling

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to remote

areas

such

as the South Pole is on the increase. In my opinion,

although

there is a problem with

environmental

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the environmental

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pollution in these

areas

the

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new

discoveries

can open up endless possibilities.

Thus

, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. One of the disadvantages of increasing

people

going to distant places is the potential for environmental pollution.

People

will create a lot of rubbish.

Furthermore

, some

people

are less environmentally conscious as they leave rubbish in the area.

As a result

people

can cause environmental damage to the area,

such

as the death of animals through accidental ingestion of rubbish or plant death through contamination of the soil.

However

, by

traveling

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to these remote

areas

, new

discoveries

may be made which may contribute to the development of human society.

Firstly

, it could help us discover more clean energy sources. The fossil fuels we use now have had many negative effects on the climate,

such

as the global warming effect,

whereas

in recent years some clean energy sources have been discovered in remote

areas

, like the ocean near the South Pole.

Secondly

, it can

also

help us to discover more creatures from which we can learn a lot, just as a small bird can help

people

to create

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aircraft, and more biological

discoveries

can help us to develop

technology

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. In conclusion, the problem of environmental pollution in remote

areas

can be well combated through the creation of policies.

However

, new

discoveries

give human society infinite possibilities,

for example

, a better solving of environmental problems and a new technology to advance human society.

Therefore

I think

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benefits rather than the harms.

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