The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar graph illustrates how much money the country gained from exporting
goods
in five segments, whereas
the table depicts the proportion change in values, both charts show information between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, it is clear that
the largest export earning is petroleum products
, while
the least is textiles. However
, the percentage of gems and jewellery had a decreasing trend
, in contrast
, others had a went up trend
.
In terms of monetary value
, the largest export category was petroleum products
, with a value
of more than 60 dollar billion, followed by engineered goods
at around 57 dollar billion from 2015 to 2016. Although
in 2015, the rate of export earnings in petroleum goods
, engineered goods
, agricultural products
and textiles were smaller values than in the year 2016, in terms of gems and jewellery witnessed much more value
than other types of products
which differed at around 3 dollar billion.
The proportion change in values from 2015 to 2016, the highest amount of value
is textiles which is
15.24% and the least is agricultural Change the verb form
are
goods
which are
0.81%, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
although
gems and jewellery had a declining trend
(5.18%), other terms of products
had an increasing trend
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