Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is considered by some

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that being a university

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graduate is the key to securing a good

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there are others who think that it is better to have

experience

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and soft

skills

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. In my opinion, I believe that having a university

education

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is essential for academic jobs,

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soft

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and

experience

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are more useful in business. On the one hand, many think it is easier for most

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to find a good

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if they are

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university graduates with a good degree.

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, having tertiary

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puts

people

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one step ahead of others who do not and

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can be the deciding factor in getting a good

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. The competition to get into universities and

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increasing number of graduates

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just how significant

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level of

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is for

people

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's future

work

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opportunities.

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, having

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experience

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and soft

skills

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,

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as leadership

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and other interpersonal

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, can

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throw the balance in favour of the applicant,

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some. For many positions there are an overwhelming number of applicants and,

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, it is often thought that having relevant

experience

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in that line of

work

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or having acquired useful soft

skills

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that can be valuable to a company, can put one ahead of the the game when applying for a

position

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.

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, in my opinion, whether

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high

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level

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education

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or

skills

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and

experience

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, depends on the the

position

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being applied for. Take

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law, medicine or teaching, it is impossible to be considered for a

position

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without the required educational background.

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, in business, it would be more important for a candidate to have soft

skills

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and

experience

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in that line of business so they can step into a

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without

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training and be of immediate benefit to the company. In conclusion, getting a good

job

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requires a relevant background either in

experience

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or

education

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depending on the type of

work

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and field.

People

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should make sure they attain the necessary

skills

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or degrees before applying for a

job

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in order to be sure of success.