The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Pictures below illustrate the process of recycling the
aluminium
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cans
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First of all, after the usage of
cans
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by humans, the
cans
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are thrown into the trash bin containing only
aluminium
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cans
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.
Subsequently
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, the trash
cans
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are emptied into trucks for the collection of
cans
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for
further
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processing. afterwards the collection, the
cans
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are transferred to the cleaning,shredding,sorting and compressing industry for the next procedure. later on, the
aluminium
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material is melted in the melting industry for
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process of rolling the material and manufacturing
aluminium
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cans
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ranging in thickness from 2.5 mm to 6.5 mm. the material
then
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is used to make
cans
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and
then
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the same
cans
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are used to refill the drinks the people drink.
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