The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Pictures below illustrate the process of recycling the
aluminium
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cans
First of all, after the usage of Use synonyms
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by humans, the Use synonyms
cans
are thrown into the trash bin containing only Use synonyms
aluminium
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are emptied into trucks for the collection of Use synonyms
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afterwards the collection, the Linking Words
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are transferred to the cleaning,shredding,sorting and compressing industry for the next procedure. later on, the Use synonyms
aluminium
material is melted in the melting industry for Use synonyms
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process of rolling the material and manufacturing Linking Words
aluminium
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cans
ranging in thickness from 2.5 mm to 6.5 mm.
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the same Linking Words
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are used to refill the drinks the people drink.Use synonyms
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