Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

In the
last
years
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,
traffic
congestion increased really fast within big towns
due to
the rise of car's popularity. I believe that
this
statement is true and
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essay will give evidence of my belief and will
also
propose some ideas to cope with
this
issue. In recent times, the need
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independence pushed more and more people to buy their own
car
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. In fact, a current survey conducted by the University of Milan shows that in 2023 in Italy one person out of 3 owns
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own
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vehicle
and
consequently
traffic
grew
in
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a
significant
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way. Regardless
from
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the statistics, the
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cars number is a phenomenon that we can witness in our daily life just by taking a walk in a big city. As regards my personal experience, I can firmly state that lately moving within my town, Turin, has never been
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tougher
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. Once going to the
center
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used to take 10 minutes by walking from my house.
Instead
, now it requires at least 20 minutes more thanks to the intense
traffic
that obligates you to wait a lot of time
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traffic
lights to
finally
become green.
Moreover
,
roads
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congestion has
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plenty
of other dangerous consequences
such
as air pollution and increased risk of accidents. The terrible drawbacks I previously mentioned represent a huge problem that should be addressed by politicians. There are tons of ways in which governments could try to face
this
trouble.
For instance
, they could introduce a speed limit in certain urban areas so that people are discouraged to drive close to the town
center
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. Plus, in
this
way
traffic
is more controlled.
Furthermore
, in order to reduce the usage of cars, public means of transport
such
as the bus and the metro should be improved.
To sum up
, it is undeniable that
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city
congestion is rising.
This
affair regards every single citizen who drives a
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vehicle
,
however
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I think that
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authorities have the duty to deal with it by implementing laws in order to prevent
this
unpleasant situation.
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