Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

The rates of

traffic

congestions

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in cities have lifted

since

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last

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thirty years

due to

increasing

of

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car numbers per individual. I mostly agree with

this

statement because private

vehicles

cause

to

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jamming in

traffic

, particularly at junctions. Governments may claim additional taxes and they may improve public

transportation

webs in order to ratify

this

situation.

Firstly

,

this

case

leads to create dense areas

in particular

regions of

traffic

gradually. Many individuals use their

vehicles

for transporting themselves only,

although

their

vehicles

’ capacity is at least five. To illustrate

that

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in Istanbul, one of the most notorious

city

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which

suffer

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from

traffic

, nearly 50 per cent of

vehicles

are private cars.

This

situation

give

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rises

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to redundant density in main

transportation

ways, junctions and streets.

Thus

, I agree

this

case

and its negative effects should be solved.

Secondly

, to discourage individuals from possessing more

vehicles

, governments should assume some

responsibilities

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. They may regulate a new rule for the owning car policies. Additional taxes may be implemented in them.

In addition

, they can enhance fossil

fuels’

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fuels

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taxes. Apart from these, people should be spurred to use public

transportation

. Governments may present and construct new ways and circuits to magnify

transportation

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the transportation

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web in cities.

Therefore

, they would be

reduction

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in car ownership rates and

traffic

may be alleviated. In conclusion, causes, examples and solutions can be multiplied

with

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this

case

. It is obvious that

this

case

needs probably

a

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long term

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planning but it can be solved if authorities work comprehensively and

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are patient

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patient

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.