Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society. What do you think are the main causes of unemployment? What solutions can you suggest?

Many

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countries’ one of the main

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issues

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is

unemployment

.

This

issue

is caused by many factors

such

as migration to improved

cities

, low salaries and redundant

graduates

for certain possessions. I think

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status

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of the

case

can be fixed with some regulations by government policies. The first

problem

of

this

case

is mass migration to industrial

cities

. Even though

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initially

, rural people were called for filling

to

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space in

workforce

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the workforce

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, today, they have been suffering to live in

cities

due to

insufficient work

rates

.

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, in

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terms

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, those who cannot find

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a job

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job

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to do leads to be

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a burden

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burden

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and increase the crime

rates

in the

cities

. To handle these problems

governments

should carry out new regulations for migration and rural

cities

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cities'

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status. They can run some spurring programmes to let these people

to

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live

in

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agricultural lands.

Thus

,

unemployment

rates

would decrease and people’s workforce can be used more prolific. The second

problem

of

this

case

is

low

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payments of workers.

By

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some financial

crisis

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crises

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, companies may decide to hold or

slight

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decrease

of

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workers’ salaries. In

this

situation,

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amount of workers may resign

their

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from their

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contract

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contracts

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because they do not want to devote their efforts

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bad financial status. These improvements result in rising

of

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unemployment

. Ministry of Working and

governments

should assume these problems. Steady and fair regulations ought to be done and adhered

by

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some laws for annual salary

rates

. Some enforcements to companies in order to

defending

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labourers

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right may be applied by

governments

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officials. The third

problem

of

this

case

necessary

graduates

and courses for certain possessions.

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students study in

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and universities, they do not expect that they would be

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trouble

to find

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finding

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a job.

However

, many

governments

cannot plan the need

of

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for

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graduates

in particular

fields and they may face the facts.

As a result

, excessive numbers of skilled workers trigger

the

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unemployment

rates

. To fix

this

issue

,

Ministry

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the Ministry

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of education and

governments

should run

plan

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plans

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in

public

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the public

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and private

sector

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sectors

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. They can close or open new

some

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branches in education facilities which will meet the need of particular sectors.

Therefore

,

graduates

can find proper

works

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work

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and

unemployment

rates

would reduce. In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied about

this

problem

.

Unemployment

is a magnifying

issue

for many countries and problems would be more dangerous in

case

we have

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get

preventions

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