The pie charts on the left illustrate the proportion of three electricity-generating sources in the German and French markets in 2009 while the charts on the right further detail the composition of the segment of renewable energy in that same year.
The pie charts on the left illustrate the proportion of three
electricity
-generating sources in the German and French markets in 2009 while
the charts on the right further
detail the composition of the segment of renewable energy in that same year.
Overall
, despite the total electricity
generation in both countries not differing dramatically, some striking discrepancies can be noted. Germany produced almost six times as much conventional thermal electricity
than
France. Change preposition
as
Conversely
, the French generated approximately triple the percentage of electricity
through nuclear power plants compared to the Germans.
When zooming in on the share of renewable energies, further
noteworthy differences can be seen. With 39.3%, the largest segment of the German market in sustainable energy sources originated from biomass, while
only 8.1% of the
French Correct article usage
apply
electricity
production is based on that source. Wind power makes up 36.9% of the renewables in Germany, whereas
this
type of electricity
accounts for only 10.5% in
its French counterpart. In France, Change preposition
of
on the other hand
, hydroelectric power dominates the renewable electricity
market, standing at a share of 80.5%. At 17.7%, this
segment contributes far less to the field of sustainable electricity
in Germany.Submitted by mamirzaium on
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