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Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities ,which are played alone .To what exteny do you agree or disagree .

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Team activities are
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 more fun and indulge a person to do things they are anxious about doing alone, they are able to discuss and bring new ideas to the table, and help out with their social
skills
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Ideally
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 most people prefer working in groups than on their own ,especially with school projects and jobs, it
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 assists within learning competitive
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.
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, mainly most sports are team-based, and you will need a
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 of people to play with.
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 , leadership and building relationship
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 could
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 be built by working together in a
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.It helps in becoming sympathetic towards others players because each player is entitled to share everything with the other player.
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, everyone subconsciously feels the responsibility towards each other .
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 of college students working on a project will enhance their verbal and non-verbal communication styles. People tend to follow the law of order. On the other side, a person who works or plays in solo activities develops a sense of competitiveness, but
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 We cannot forget individual gains more
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 in
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 work and those
skills
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 can be applied to our daily life. In conclusion, more and more
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 can be discovered by performing in a team,
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,
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 as a sense of competition
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 could be developed through solo activities.
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