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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently attended a series of English lessons in a language school. However, you were unhappy with the teaching quality. Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter: • explain why you chose to study English at the school • describe the problems you had with the lessons • suggest how the classes could be improved Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir, I hope you are having a good day. I am a new student enrolled in general English level 4
this
 week. I came to your English institution because I would like to improve my daily conversation. I will have a chance to work overseas next year.
Also
, I have heard the quality of teachers
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 excellent in your institutions.
However
, I found some challenges
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this
 week when I was learning in
class
. I do not have chances to talk more during
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class
.
Also
,
teacher
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 did not pay
his
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 we are
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. During our conversation
class
, the
teacher
, Steven, always divides students into three groups and practices conversation. That means there are four people in a group. I barely have a chance to talk, especially when some classmates are talkative. I would like to suggest that teachers can divide us into a pair as a group and students have more chances to talk to each other. During the
class
, we can switch our speaking partners many times. At the same time, the
teacher
 can sit between each group and give some
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 during we are talking. Thank you for your help
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 conveying
this
 advice to our
teacher
. Best regards, Kathy.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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