You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently attended a series of English lessons in a language school. However, you were unhappy with the teaching quality. Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter: • explain why you chose to study English at the school • describe the problems you had with the lessons • suggest how the classes could be improved Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir, I hope you are having a good day. I am a new student enrolled in general English level 4

this

week. I came to your English institution because I would like to improve my daily conversation. I will have a chance to work overseas next year.

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, I have heard the quality of teachers

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excellent in your institutions.

However

, I found some challenges

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this

week when I was learning in

class

. I do not have chances to talk more during

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class

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teacher

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did not pay

his

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attention to

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students’ grammatical mistakes

while

we are

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. During our conversation

class

, the

teacher

, Steven, always divides students into three groups and practices conversation. That means there are four people in a group. I barely have a chance to talk, especially when some classmates are talkative. I would like to suggest that teachers can divide us into a pair as a group and students have more chances to talk to each other. During the

class

, we can switch our speaking partners many times. At the same time, the

teacher

can sit between each group and give some

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during we are talking. Thank you for your help

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conveying

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advice to our

teacher

. Best regards, Kathy.

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2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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8 paragraphs

211 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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