“Higher salaries are better than other incentives for motivating workers.” To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Looking at the task below, it's evident the way in which different opinions, concern "incentive", may turn up, giving the opportunity to think and explain a personal idea, after having made a comparison and clear sentence where is relevant.
To begin
with, the factor that every single situation, experience or perception, is experienced differently by each person; before giving a personal opinion, one needs to take into consideration several factors. Firstly
, it's important to say that money
has always been one of the highest incentives in the world, yet as we know everything is going around with that, and here's why a high percentage of people align themselves with the power of money
. One clear example can be, when at work, we get motivated by higher salaries, instead
of career growth, because for someone, following material things, is obviously easier than giving importance for what are the values of our life
, and it is Duo to this
reason why at the working place we found people without creativity because for them don't really matter what means found a motivation every day, what's is relevant Instead
is having money
every month. In, comparison some others completely avoid the importance of money
and carry on what makes them happy and feel proud of themselves. For instance
, they live their work life
completely differently from the persons of the first case, because, self-motivated is, of ,course the main thing in their life
. In my opinion, and thinking about my personal experiences, I can absolutely disagree with those who are alienated by money
and forgive what can really improve ourselves and get better in life
at work. To sum up
, with what has already been stated and compared, it's important to highlight the importance of What I'm calling" being happy without having anything"which means (in this
case), finding a motivation inside of us, without attributing our happiness to material things.Submitted by veronicalindiner1998 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite