. You want to improve your knowledge of foreign languages which can help you at work. Write a letter to a foreign language teacher and say • Where did you hear about the teacher? • Why do you want to learn a foreign language? • Ask some questions about the course.

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Dear Mr Kevin, I am writing to you to take

German

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language classes at an advanced level which could help me to for better interaction with

German

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clients. I was looking to improve my

German

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dialect when one of my colleagues introduce your name that you are providing an online training session. Actually, he

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took some lessons from you

last

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year. The reason to learn

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language is that my organization are dealing with many

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clients. They are usually comfortable with us using the English language but it will be more helpful for them if we use their native speech. It would be more useful in my work.

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, I need some clarification about the course

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as suitable timing as per your convenience, the Total hours of the training, the amount of time needed to spare daily, and

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, the fees for

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session. I look forward to hearing from you on

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at the earliest. Yours Sincerely, Mandeep Singh

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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