The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives
the
information Correct article usage
apply
how
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on how
plastic
Use synonyms
bottles
are recycled.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
there Linking Words
are
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is
total
of nine steps in the Add an article
a total
plastic
recycling process. Use synonyms
This
begins with collecting empty Linking Words
plastic
Use synonyms
bottles
and ends with making new products from pure recycled Use synonyms
plastic
.
Before the process starts, residents put used Use synonyms
plastic
Use synonyms
bottles
into the recycle bin. It is transferred by a truck to the recycling centre. At the recycling centre, the staff choose Use synonyms
bottles
by one's hand that can be reused, which are clean and undamaged. Once the sorting task is done, Use synonyms
bottles
are compressed into blocks. These Use synonyms
plastic
blocks are crushed into small pieces by a crusher and washed in water to remove dirt.
After the washing process is completed, the clean pieces are put into a machine to produce Use synonyms
plastic
pellets in step six. Use synonyms
Then
, pellets are turned into Linking Words
plastic
powders, which are heated to form raw materials. Use synonyms
The following step is
stacking raw Linking Words
plastic
to store. Use synonyms
Finally
, raw Linking Words
plastic
materials are sent to the factories that produce clothes, Use synonyms
plastic
bags, or Use synonyms
bottles
again and are ready to be sold to consumers.Use synonyms
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