The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives
the
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information
how
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plastic
bottles
are recycled.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there
are
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total
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of nine steps in the
plastic
recycling process.
This
begins with collecting empty
plastic
bottles
and ends with making new products from pure recycled
plastic
. Before the process starts, residents put used
plastic
bottles
into the recycle bin. It is transferred by a truck to the recycling centre. At the recycling centre, the staff choose
bottles
by one's hand that can be reused, which are clean and undamaged. Once the sorting task is done,
bottles
are compressed into blocks. These
plastic
blocks are crushed into small pieces by a crusher and washed in water to remove dirt. After the washing process is completed, the clean pieces are put into a machine to produce
plastic
pellets in step six.
Then
, pellets are turned into
plastic
powders, which are heated to form raw materials.
The following step is
stacking raw
plastic
to store.
Finally
, raw
plastic
materials are sent to the factories that produce clothes,
plastic
bags, or
bottles
again and are ready to be sold to consumers.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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