The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the general amount of carbon dioxide

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released by a person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.

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, the country that had the highest C02 emissions is the United Kingdom.

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, Sweden was the second and

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, Portugal is the least. Recording to the information, the line in the United Kingdom dropped gradually with

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consistency.

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, Sweden's line

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fluctuated

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1967 and 1977 when it was dramatically rising up but from 1977 to 2007, it went down suddenly.

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, Portugal and Italy were similar since they

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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more?

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Today many people frequently change their jobs. What problems does it create? How to solve them?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?