The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information on the amount earned per week
of
different Change preposition
by
age
groups (21-60 Use synonyms
years
) The earnings are expressed in Use synonyms
pounds
.
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Overall
, the graph expresses a substantial increase corresponding to the Linking Words
age
of those employed. The most significant growth in earnings can be seen in the middle-aged group (36-40) with a plummet in graduates of other types of degrees. In fact, workers with other degrees suffer a considerable decline in earnings by the Use synonyms
age
of 56-60 Use synonyms
years
.
Generally speaking, employees who graduatedUse synonyms
a
higher degree earn significantly more than those with Change preposition
with a
the
first degree, with a slight growth of just over 700 Correct article usage
a
pounds
to 45 Use synonyms
years
, followed by an unnoticeable decline by 51 Use synonyms
years
, which passes to a high point of just bellow 800 Use synonyms
pounds
of old-aged employees.
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Similarly
, employees with a first degree witness an unsubstantial fluctuation, Linking Words
as a result
of the gradual climb from approximately 350 Linking Words
pounds
at an adult Use synonyms
age
to a high point of just under 700Use synonyms
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