The maps below show the changes that occured to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000.

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The diagram illustrates how Willington town evolved through the years, in 1780, 1860, and 2000. In overview, farmland completely disappeared

while

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townships increased

its

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their

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size by five times. Basic human necessities were built

while

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defrosting all the woods. Between 1780 and 1860, only a few changes were made, farmers half of that used by large

while

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villagers doubled. In the

river

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area, crossing the

river

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, a bridge was built, and connecting the water and a town, road construction was taken place. In 2000, significant innovations are made by the people, much of them including the construction of buildings for 500 households. Since 1860, forests have been replaced with three sports

field

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fields

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Correct word choice

and in

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between them there are two schools, paralleled with one another. Another road was added between the houses and the school area. Alongside the

river

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, five shops were built, and on the south side of the

river

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, a wetland for birds appeared.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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