The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant
The pie chart compares data in
percentage
about westing water
in three factors including Industrial , agricultural and domestic uses in six different parts of the world.
We can see that the highest spending of
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on
water
is for the
Agricultural Correct article usage
apply
use
in Africa
, Central and South East Asia
, South
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and South
America
. However
, Industrial use
plays most of the water
consumption in North America
and Europe.
Industrial use
of water
plays just over a half consumption
, 52 %, in Europe and just under a half, 48%,in North Change preposition
of consumption
Africa
. In addition
, it is the minority factor of used water
in Africa
, 7%, and Central
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in Central
Asia
, only 5%.
By contrast
, agricultural use
has a very large majority in three parts of the world at once. In Africa
, Central and South Asia
the percentage
of consumption deference from 81% to 88%. Furthermore
, in South America
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,America
this
type of use
also
has a significantly
proportion. Change the adverb
significant
In the
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The
percentage
is 71 %.
Last
way of using Correct article usage
The last
water
is Domestic
. It has the smallest value among Change the word
Domestically
this
factors. Central and South Correct determiner usage
these
Asia
have the smallest percentages in this
group, both of them are 7 %. Moreover
, South America
has the biggest amount of percentage
in
the domestic Change preposition
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use
of water
factor, it is 19%.Submitted by akimelena1969 on
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