Some people think that there should be a complete ban on all forms of advertising. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many today come to the conclusion that

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should have a restricted banning policy on all forms of advertising. In my own perspective, I partly agree with the opinion that

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its effects on both producers and consumers. First and foremost, it is a belief that in

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modern era, individuals should all have the freedom in advertising their products. Thanks to the improvement of technology and

media

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, people in today’s world are becoming far

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to upload

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advertise their goods through means of

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, especially online platforms

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as Facebook, or Google, which are already renowned to global users.

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reason,

information

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is created and published daily.

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, national

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international economic states would be affected.

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large

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of advertisements uploaded,

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corporations, which have a responsibility to control and censor the

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, would earn profit. Since

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, nations would be developed with the amount of profit

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earned through

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.

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,

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should have policies to control and filter some negative

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. As the number of advertisements is growing and the censoring department of companies is less restricted

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it was, there would be some uncensored and harmful

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spreading to consumers.

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, some users would be scammed and harm their own health states.

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, there is still

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that has beneficial impacts on consumers. In case

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banned all forms of advertising, residents would not know the variety of products that do not exist on shelves in the local stores, and it, in other meaning, can be a way to manipulate

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society.

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,

governments

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should not ban advertisements

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or altering, rather than banning. In conclusion, I trust that society should allow diverse forms of advertising,

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, the amount of

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should not be uploaded freely, but putting under censoring