The maps bellow show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps bellow show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps demonstrate what happened in Kimsville, from 2002 to the present day. In general, it appears that Kimsville has become a much more modern city, with far more entertainment and transport facilities. Kimsville looks industrialized and urbanized, having got rid of more than half of the green area in the town. One of the most interesting things is that formerly it had a huge factory, which produced a lot of air pollution.
However
, it has been knocked down and replaced with a software company. In 2002, there was no accommodation for citizens, so they cut down trees and built new apartments, which are located next to the shopping centre. Another striking edit is that
this
centre has had an extension. It seems that the design of the aforementioned building hasn’t been modified, but it has been added more floors. On the south side of the town, the trees have been removed in order to construct a football stadium. On the right side of the stadium, there was a theatre of old cinemas, having been transformed into a pub with no visible difference in style. Near the city centre, the lake has disappeared
as well as
plants, resulting in a new train station has been introduced.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • modernization
  • transportation routes
  • green space
  • public facilities
  • community impact
  • environmental effect
  • historic preservation
  • architectural integration
  • urban planning
  • amenities
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