the graphs below show the percentage of households with internet and broadband access in Australia, together with frequency of internet access, between 2006-07 and 2012-13. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

the graphs below show the percentage of households with internet and broadband access in Australia, together with frequency of internet access, between 2006-07 and 2012-13.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant
The given line graph provides information about the proportion of households where not having
internet
access for different reasons between 2008 till 2014.
Overall
, lack of skills, not needing the
internet
and privacy-security concerns have experienced an upward trend,
whereas
high equipment cost has shown a downward trend. In
this
term, high access costs did not change over the given year period. When we look at the graph in detail, people who do not need the
internet
were 30% in 2008. During the next five years, the figure sharply increased to 60%.In 2014, it decreased to almost 50%. The community do not have
internet
because of a lack of skill that rate was about 15% in 2008.
Then
, it slightly increased, and it reached more than 20% in 2013.
Last
year, it dramatically increased to more than 30%.
While
the reason for privacy-security concerns which approximately 4% of people do not have the
internet
.
Then
, the figure slightly decreased, and it reached about 1%in 2013. Next year, it increased to less than 10% respectively. When we look at the rest of the graph in detail, because of high equipment costs, about 10% of people do not have the
internet
in 2008.
Then
, it went up to almost 20% in 2011. The rest of the time, it dropped to a bit more than 10%.
Finally
, the high access cost rate did not change over the time period, which was a bit more than 10%.
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