The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030
The graph illustrates data from Annual
Energy
Outlook 2008 on energy
generation in the USA over a 51-year period from 1980 to 2030.
Overall
, oil and petrol contributed majority
of the Add an article
the majority
a majority
energy
consumption and it will rose
over the period, Wrong verb form
rise
whereas
the least amount was used in hydropower
sector, which will remain stable until 2030.
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the hydropower
Firstly
, 35 quadrillion petrol and oil were used in 1980. There were some slight fluctuations until 2005 and after that
it rose remarkably and will hit the peak point in 2030 and the number is expected to be 48 quadrillions. Add a comma
,that
However
, natural gas and coal started at 20 and 16 quadrillions respectively. Almost some proportion of energy
was used from 1985 to 2015. Although
using of coal is forecasted to increase, natural gas generation will remain stable.
Moreover
, the uses of nuclear, solar and hydropower
started at nearly
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the nearly
same
amount. Nuclear production increased slightly and is expected to remain unchanged, Correct article usage
the same
while
solar and hydropower
experienced some fluctuations. Then
solar uses
increased and will have the same production but Fix the agreement mistake
use
hydropower
will dwindle at the end
of the period.Submitted by englishpills077 on
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