Some people tend to buy products or get services instantly, without waiting. Why is it happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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The
beaviour
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behaviour
of
customers
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has enormously changed. Many
customers
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have become more impatient and expect instant replies and services from their service providers, and I believe that
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is mainly because of the intrusion of social media platforms in marketing, and
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is definitely a negative development. In the beginning, Facebook and Instagram provide instant services to clients. To illustrate, whenever there is a brand, its marketing team introduces artificial intelligence
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promptly replies to
customers
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. An eminent example is the official page of sports brands
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as Nike and Adidas; the
prices
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and all details of
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the shipment
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are quickly provided, and diverse commodities are even exhibited in
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forms
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of photos.
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definitely satisfies consumers, but in actuality,
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could have detrimental impacts in the long run.
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, buying products without waiting could be a fatal mistake. If someone rushes into buying things without comparing
prices
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, he or she could end up with the worst option, and he or she may even regret the decision when it is too late.
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, many Egyptian entrepreneurs sell clothes, and they usually show the
prices
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and dates of delivery without referring to the quality of the product. Eventually, the commodity is shipped to the customer, and there is a consensus among
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Egyptian
youth
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that these websites are frauds and provide erroneous information about what they sell. In conclusion, I believe that
customers
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have to be vigilant and not
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be trapped by
some
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apply
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webpages
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web pages
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and social media advertisements that provide prompt services. It is definitely true that prompt response is part and parcel of effective marketing, but in many countries, many consumers are duped, and the latter have to negotiate
prices
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and compare products.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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