The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013

The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013
The pie charts illustrate the retail online
sales
in New Zealand from 2003 to 2013.
Overall
, there are gradual changes in the four products sold, and it is not only an upward trend but
also
a downward trend. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that in 2003, the travel sector sold the product at 36%, and it was highest than the other items.
However
, the selling showed a gradual decrease of 7% in 2013. The opposite trend showed by film/music, it was only selling at 21% at the first of the period, but the
sales
increased moderately by almost 50% in the next decade. In the Books items, their
sales
accounted for 19% selling in 2003, and they were a slight rise to 22% in 2012. It was different compared with clothes in which they're selling their product almost one-fourth at the beginning period, but the
sales
dropped slightly approximately 16% in the
last
period.
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  • Comparative analysis
  • E-commerce
  • Retail sectors
  • Growth rate
  • Decade
  • Decline
  • Trends
  • Online transactions
  • Consumer behavior
  • Market share
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Digital era
  • Accessibility
  • User-friendly platform
  • Market dynamics
  • Predictive outlook
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