The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls In the UK, divided into three categories, from 1999&2012.
The bar charts
gives
information about consuming phone calls per Change the verb form
give
minutes
in England. Fix the agreement mistake
minute
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there are three Add a comma
,Also
type
of Change to a plural noun
types
outline
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outlines
in
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over
period
of seven Add an article
a period
the period
years
.
Overall
, local-fixed
line ranked first in 1996. Correct article usage
the local-fixed
However
, mobiles stood last
in the first year. The chart saw a fluctuation during those years
.
At first,
mobiles
rose gradually from 1995 to 1998. Since 1996 it saw a sharp growth which is followed by Fix the agreement mistake
mobile
peak
at approximately 45 Add an article
a peak
minutes
in 2002.
Between 1995 and 1998, national
and international-fixed Add an article
the national
line
saw Fix the agreement mistake
lines
an
steady growth. Remove the article
apply
However
, in next
two Correct article usage
the next
years
they witnessed a plateau. In 2002, they stood at 60 Add a comma
,years
minutes
before that, it increased gradually.
During
1995 to 1998, there was Change preposition
From
a
moderate growth. Correct article usage
apply
However
, locals-fixed
line reached a high of 90 Add an article
the locals-fixed
minutes
. Sadly, they had a slight drop in next
three Correct article usage
the next
years
ahead.Submitted by mahsa_shafie1996 on
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