The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002
The given bar chart displays how many billions of
minutes
were spent in the UK on telephone calls either on a local fixed line, national and international fixed line, or from mobile phones, from 1995 to 2002.
Overall
, it can be seen that calling from local fixed
lines
was always the most popular form of doing it. It can be
also
seen that both using national and international fixed
lines
or local
lines
grew from 1995 The use of local
lines
grew from just over 70 billion
minutes
in 1995 to 90
billions
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in 1999 until a fall of 20 billion
minutes
. Meanwhile,
minutes
spent on national and international fixed
lines
experienced a steady increase throughout the 7 years long time period, and those
minutes
used on mobile phones gained an impressive increase, starting from almost not being even used to a steady growth that led to almost 50
billions
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of
minutes
on calling in 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, lines with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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