The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .
The diagram provides data that compare the percentage of families’ income that they spent in one week in 1968 and in 2018,
as well as
, what did they use that money
for.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that in the past, people mostly spent their money
on food; however
, when
time passed, they were likely to manage most of it between food, housing, transport and leisure.
A closer look at the bar chart reveals that in 1968, the population gave most of Correct word choice
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food with 35% of their salaries ; Correct article usage
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other usages
such
as fuel and power, clothing and footwear and household goods to name but a few, only got about 5-10% of the money
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On the other hand
, the crowd that lived in 2018 mostly divided their weekly income equally; in addition
, most of the money
was shared between cuisine, residence, transport and hobby about 10-25% each, furthermore
the rest of it was divided in smaller proportions with lower than 10% for each aspect.Submitted by nutneera.k on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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