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Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer?

#families
From the first day of birth
people
’s lives start with meeting with relatives. We can’t even understand what is happening around us, but we are able to feel comfort and love from
family
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 with their activity. Some scientists explain
this
like
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 hormonal
reaction
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 and others
like
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 natural feelings between relatives.
However
, after a close relationship with our
families
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 we start to explore
this
 world just by ourselves.
Firstly
, children come to kindergarten, study at school and
as a result
 meet their peers and other
people
. So, the comfort zone changes with
a
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new
experience
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 and new feelings. The first cause of non-close relationships with families might be the essential desire of having independence. It is an ordinary situation in kindergarten or in primary school when your mother or dad help with simple things like preparing clothes, putting the right books in the bag and making some food for lunch,
whereas
 in secondary school or
higher
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 you should be able to do
this
 without parent’s help or with minor help. These conditions can be created by friends, who already do a lot of important thighs without help. In that case, many children start thinking
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the other way, and when they realize that independence really exists they don’t need that deep connection with family anymore. The second cause of non-close relationships with families is the era of digital life.
For example
, we don't need offline communication, we have
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 possibility to make a phone call with or without video
instead
 of wasting
time
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 traffic
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 when we don’t live in the same place with family.
This
 situation
also
 makes them a little lazy and
as a result
people
 just don’t see the necessity of extra
communications
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 with family. So,
people
 just continue to live their
life
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 and focus on themselves.
This
 problem can be solved if
people
 start to manage their
time
 and try to find a couple of hours in a week for spending
time
 with family in advance.
Also
, they can include different activities or meetings in cafes for brunch that can help to spend
time
 together more interestingly, properly and with profit for each member of the family.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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