The diagram below show how leather goods are producted. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below show how leather goods are producted. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration highlights data about the steps of the production of leather goods. There are 11 different stages in the process, starting with drying animal skin and ending up with creating items by using
this
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material.
Firstly
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, the process starts with collecting animal skin and
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drying it outside. In the next stage, these items have been picked up by a truck, after which it is delivered to the factory.
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, after being washed in the water
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certain time, animal skin
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undergoes a special flattening by a machine.
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this
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, the material has been washed with water and vegetable mattes.
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, if we look at how to produce
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material, it has begun with polishing.
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, the same truck picked up dry materials and delivered these to other manufactories.
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, goods production
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created clothes, boots and entertainment items.
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completes the process of the production of leather goods.
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