Two pie charts show a comparison of the proportion of people with different degrees and professions who worked in an engineering company in 1980 and 2008
The two pie charts compare the various
degrees
held by graduates
in an Engineering company percentage-wise between 1980 and 2008
Overall
, in the beginning, first
degree
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degrees
Arts
and Masters Change preposition
in Arts
Science
were very popular, whereas
PhD
degrees
were not preferred by many. In comparison, PhD
degrees
gained popularity after nearly three decades, and First
-degree
Arts
and Science
lost their significance
Nearly a quarter of the graduates
had opted for First
degree
Arts
in 1980 but there was a sharp decline in 2008 with only 11% of the graduates
goingo
for it. Correct your spelling
going
First
Add a hyphen
First-degree
degree
Science
was held by 19% of the graduates
in 1989 with a moderate fall in 2008 with only 10% going for it. Masters in Arts
and Science
remained constant in both periods. There was a significant increase in the number of PhD
degree
holders in Arts
from 2% in 1980 to 7% in 2008. PhD
degree
in Science
experienced dramatic growth from 13% in 1980 to 30% in 2008.
To summarize , the most marked changes are in the First
-degree
Arts
and Change preposition
of Arts
Science
and the PhD
degrees
for Arts
and Science
. The former experienced a decline while
the latter grew more popular in 2008.Submitted by omondavlat91 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words degrees, graduates, first, degree, arts, science, phd with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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