Two pie charts show a comparison of the proportion of people with different degrees and professions who worked in an engineering company in 1980 and 2008

Two pie charts show a comparison of the proportion of people with different degrees and professions who worked in an engineering company in 1980 and 2008
The two pie charts compare the various
degrees
held by
graduates
in an Engineering company percentage-wise between 1980 and 2008
Overall
, in the beginning,
first
degree
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degrees
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Arts
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and Masters
Science
were very popular,
whereas
PhD
degrees
were not preferred by many. In comparison,
PhD
degrees
gained popularity after nearly three decades, and
First
-
degree
Arts
and
Science
lost their significance Nearly a quarter of the
graduates
had opted for
First
degree
Arts
in 1980 but there was a sharp decline in 2008 with only 11% of the
graduates
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going
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degree
Science
was held by 19% of the
graduates
in 1989 with a moderate fall in 2008 with only 10% going for it. Masters in
Arts
and
Science
remained constant in both periods. There was a significant increase in the number of
PhD
degree
holders in
Arts
from 2% in 1980 to 7% in 2008.
PhD
degree
in
Science
experienced dramatic growth from 13% in 1980 to 30% in 2008. To summarize , the most marked changes are in the
First
-
degree
Arts
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and
Science
and the
PhD
degrees
for
Arts
and
Science
. The former experienced a decline
while
the latter grew more popular in 2008.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words degrees, graduates, first, degree, arts, science, phd with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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