Two pie charts show a comparison of the proportion of people with different degrees and professions who worked in an engineering company in 1980 and 2008

Two pie charts show a comparison of the proportion of people with different degrees and professions who worked in an engineering company in 1980 and 2008
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The two pie charts compare the various
degrees
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held by
graduates
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in an Engineering company percentage-wise between 1980 and 2008
Overall
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, in the beginning,
first
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degree
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degrees
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Arts
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and Masters
Science
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were very popular,
whereas
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PhD
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degrees
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were not preferred by many. In comparison,
PhD
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degrees
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gained popularity after nearly three decades, and
First
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-
degree
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Arts
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and
Science
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lost their significance Nearly a quarter of the
graduates
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had opted for
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degree
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Arts
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in 1980 but there was a sharp decline in 2008 with only 11% of the
graduates
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for it.
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First
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degree
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Science
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was held by 19% of the
graduates
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in 1989 with a moderate fall in 2008 with only 10% going for it. Masters in
Arts
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and
Science
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remained constant in both periods. There was a significant increase in the number of
PhD
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degree
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holders in
Arts
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from 2% in 1980 to 7% in 2008.
PhD
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degree
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in
Science
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experienced dramatic growth from 13% in 1980 to 30% in 2008. To summarize , the most marked changes are in the
First
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-
degree
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Arts
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and
Science
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and the
PhD
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degrees
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for
Arts
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and
Science
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. The former experienced a decline
while
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the latter grew more popular in 2008.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words degrees, graduates, first, degree, arts, science, phd with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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