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The graph below shows the change in production (Million Tonnes) of three products in the forest industry in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the change in production (Million Tonnes) of three products in the forest industry in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph reveals information regarding the general trend towards increased
production
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 of timber,
pulp
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, and
paper
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 within the forest sector in a European country from 1980 to 2000.
Overall
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, at the beginning of the period, wood is produced in the largest quantities and
paper
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 in the smallest. After two decades, the
production
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 of
paper
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 reached the top of the three products,
while
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 that of
pulp
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 was at the bottom. Between 1980 and 1985, there was an upward tendency for both wood and
pulp
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. In the beginning, the total
production
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 of wood and
pulp
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 was 6
million
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 metric
tonnes
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 and 4
million
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 metric
tonnes
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, respectively.
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, over the course of the following five years, a slight decline in
pulp
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production
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 was noted, followed by a moderate increase to just under 6
million
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tonnes
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.
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, from 1985 to 1995, there was a consistent decline in the
production
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 of timber, which went from about 9
million
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 metric
tonnes
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 to just over 6
million
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 metric
tonnes
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. All of the products increased within 2
million
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 metric
tonnes
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 after that. Starting at roughly 3
million
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 metric
tonnes
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,
paper
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production
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 increased steadily to about 9
million
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 metric
tonnes
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 in 1995,
then
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 increased gradually to 10
million
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 metric
tonnes
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 in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, pulp, paper, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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