You bought a game DVD and it is defective. Write a letter to the store for returning this DVD. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe what went wrong • say what you want from the store manager
Dear Sir or
madam
,
I am writing to complain about a game Change the capitalization
Madam
DVD
which was bought from your store last
Sunday. I would like to return it back because it is not working correctly.
Firstly
, I would like to describe myself. My name is Milav Soni from Sector No 2A, Gandhinagar. Last
Sunday, I and my cousin were come to your store for purchasing the Spiderman game DVD
. You had given me latest
Spiderman Correct article usage
the latest
DVD
from your store.
Secondly
, I would like to describe an incident what
we Correct word choice
that
were suffer
Change the verb form
suffered
while
we insert DVD
Correct article usage
the DVD
in
Gamebooks Unit first time. As we inserted Change preposition
into
into
the Correct pronoun usage
it into
DVD
panel, we heard some noisy sound
from it. Again, we inserted it and heard the same sound. After that, I look up at Fix the agreement mistake
sounds
DVD
and saw that it is cracked from Correct article usage
the DVD
Add an article
the center
center
. Change the spelling
centre
Therefore
, we thought it was available from starting. We were so nervous at that time.
Finally
, I request you please replace it with newer
one and send it to my home address. I have sent it Correct article usage
a newer
along with
this
letter. I hope next time you will give me correct
Correct article usage
the correct
DVD
.
I would appreciate if
you would look Correct pronoun usage
it if
this
matter immediately. I am waiting for your letter.
Yours sincerely,
Milav SoniChange preposition
into this
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite