The information has given by the tourist office in the United Kingdom

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The line chart illustrates the
data
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of a tourist office which has given information to the United Kingdom from January to June.
Overall
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, two out of three ways experience a gradual increase,
whereas
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another one decreased moderately. In January, wishing information by
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starts at about 900
requests
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, whilst
requests
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in person and by
letter
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/
email
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stood at above 400 and under 800
requests
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, respectively. In February, by
telephone
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fell slightly to 800 calls, and
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trend is shown by
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and
email
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approximately 700 applications.
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, in-person reveals a slight rise at 600
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. In March, the
telephone
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shows a different trend, which is a slight increase at 1000 calls, and the same trend is seen in person at 800
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.
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, the number of
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received by
letter
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/
email
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has remained stable at 700.
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,
at the end
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of the period, in-person and by
telephone
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increased significantly to about 1900 and 1600
requests
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respectively, albeit by
letter
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/
email
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showed a slight fall under 400
data
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.
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