The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and teabuying and drinking habits in five Australlan cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates citizens' different preferences for

coffee

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and tea in five certain Australian metropolises, with both purchasing and consuming habits taken into consideration.

Overall

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, it is apparent that the majority of local dwellers preferred to purchase

coffee

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or tea in a cafe during the previous

four

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weeks,

whereas

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fresh

coffee

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enjoyed the least prevalence in all five cities.

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the bar chart, the percentage of cafe visitors dominated among the three groups in

four

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metropolises, with the largest figure at 64% seen in Melbourne citizens.

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, it is in Adelaide that people were more willing to buy instant drinks, even though the disparity between café visitors and instant

coffee

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buyers was almost negligible (each of them accounted for about 50%).

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, instant

coffee

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served as an alternative for most people in the

four

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cities except Adelaide. Hobart dwellers seemed to buy it the most frequently, with the figure around 54%, followed by that in Brisbane, at about 53%. As the least favourable option, fresh

coffee

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was chosen by 44% and 43% of citizens respectively in Sydney and Melbourne during the

last

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four

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weeks.

By contrast

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, in Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart, fresh

coffee

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saw a significant gap with the other two options, with less than 40% of dwellers choosing it.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

212 words

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