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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and teabuying and drinking habits in five Australlan cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and teabuying and drinking habits in five Australlan cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates citizens' different preferences for
coffee
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 and tea in five certain Australian metropolises, with both purchasing and consuming habits taken into consideration.
Overall
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, it is apparent that the majority of local dwellers preferred to purchase
coffee
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 or tea in a cafe during the previous
four
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 weeks,
whereas
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 fresh
coffee
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 enjoyed the least prevalence in all five cities.
According to
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 the bar chart, the percentage of cafe visitors dominated among the three groups in
four
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 metropolises, with the largest figure at 64% seen in Melbourne citizens.
However
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, it is in Adelaide that people were more willing to buy instant drinks, even though the disparity between café visitors and instant
coffee
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 buyers was almost negligible (each of them accounted for about 50%).
Similarly
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, instant
coffee
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 served as an alternative for most people in the
four
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 cities except Adelaide. Hobart dwellers seemed to buy it the most frequently, with the figure around 54%, followed by that in Brisbane, at about 53%. As the least favourable option, fresh
coffee
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 was chosen by 44% and 43% of citizens respectively in Sydney and Melbourne during the
last
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four
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 weeks.
By contrast
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, in Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart, fresh
coffee
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 saw a significant gap with the other two options, with less than 40% of dwellers choosing it.

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