You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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In 1995,
the
half the Correct article usage
apply
population
of Australians who were born in Australia lived in cities
. Around twenty percent
lived in towns whilst the remaining Change the spelling
per cent
population
lives in rural areas
. In 2010, urban
Correct article usage
the urban
population
amongst native Australians increased as their percentage in cities
rose from fifty percent
to almost Change the spelling
per cent
sixty five
Add a hyphen
sixty-five
percent
. Native Australian Change the spelling
per cent
population
in both rural areas
and towns saw a significant drop to around eighteen percent
each.
Now,we will summarise the changes in Change the spelling
per cent
population
for the people born outside Australia. Majority
of the foreigners lived in Correct article usage
The majority
cities
in 1995 and the minority was spread in towns and rural areas
. This
was the case in 2010 as well but there was a change in percentages of populations in rural areas
and cities
. It can be seen that population
in rural Correct article usage
the population
areas
in 2010 decreased as compared to 1995. Whereas
the population
in cities
increased in 2010 as compared to 1995.Submitted by muazimran8 on
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