The graph below illustrates the number of Canadian university graduates for both genders from 1992 to 2007.
The Line graph provides information about the
number
of male and female university graduates
, in Canada, between the years 1992 and 2007.
In general, the visual indicates that the numbers of graduates
for both genders increased significantly by end of the period, with females being in the lead throughout the period.
To start with, by end of the academic year 1991 / 1992, the number
of female graduates
was nearly 98000, in comparison, the male number
was substantially lower, just over 70000. However
, both genders' numbers rose noticeably in the following academic years, by 1994/1995, the number
of female graduate's number
reached 105000, and for males 78000 approximately. From then
onwards, there was a moderate decline before both trends started to rise sharply, and finally
, end of the academic year 2006/2007 the female number
went up steeply to approximately 148000, likewise
the male Add a comma
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number
of graduates
increased to nearly 98000.Submitted by vet.lezan on
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