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The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New' Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New' Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the proportion of youth and girls who participated in various
sports
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 in New Zealand in the year 2002.
Overall
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, it is apparent that there were significant differences in the percentage of lad and girls who took part in most of these
sports
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,
whereas
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 basketball and tennis experienced a similar character in both genders. Among women, the most common
sports
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 were netball and swimming which made up over 25% and 23%, respectively, followed by tennis, basketball, and athletics, which all had a character of under 10%.
By contrast
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, cricket and modern arts were the least common activities chosen by women, which represented a mere 1% and 2% in that order.
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, 10% of women took part in other activities. When it comes to the figure for lads, the
sports
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 with the highest participation character were soccer, swimming, and cricket with 25%, 13%, and 12%, respectively. Meanwhile, martial arts, basketball, and tennis were in the next position which all had a figure between 8% and 11%. In stark contrast, the most striking feature can be seen from the chart is that fewer boys participated in athletics and netball than ladies did which were only 3% and 1%, compared to 5% and 21% of girls in that order. About 18% of fellows played other
sports
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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