The table shows the percentage of government expenditure on health care in five countries in 2006 as well as the proportions of 24-30-year-olds working in medical services. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the percentage of government expenditure on health care in five countries in 2006 as well as the proportions of 24-30-year-olds working in medical services. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the proportion of local
government
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spending on health care in five countries and the percentage of their workforce aged 24 to 30 in the medical service in 2006.
It is clear that
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of all five countries, the Italian
government
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spent the largest
share
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of money on health care,
while
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the Polish
government
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invested the smallest
share
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.
However
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, more than half of the 24-30-year-olds from Poland worked in health-related fields, ranking first. In terms of
government
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spending, the Italian
government
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spent the largest
share
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of money on healthcare, with a figure of 27%,
whereas
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Poland's
share
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was only 5%. The numbers for Finland, Iceland and Spain were relatively close, at 9%, 11% and 13% respectively. Looking at the young workforce in
this
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area, a stark contrast could be seen in Poland. 54% of 24-30-year-olds work in medical service, even though
government
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spending was relatively minimal. Italy, in second place,
also
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had 40% of young people working in
this
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section. Finland, Iceland and Spain had between a quarter and a third of youth working in
this
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area as well.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words government, share with synonyms.
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