employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs personal information, such as their hobbies and inerests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, an essential part of a
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resume is listing a little bit about your personality.Namely, hobbies,
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interests
and
matrernal
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maternal
material
status,which is a very
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debatable
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it is a
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useful
or not
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essential
thing.
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essay will discuss if
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type of
information
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brings
any good to the employee or not. Applying personal data in the
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job
application ,which might be
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totally
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irrelevant
to your qualifications, is something became viral in the
last
ten years.Especially in international companies that
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controlled
by capitalism.To illustrate,these companies
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international
work
ethics.
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,usually it only
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people, who are single
as well as
not passionate about anything but
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,for making sure they will fully
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fulfil
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the
work
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employers and business
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. On
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majority
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in the
work
field believes that
this
kind of private
information
should not be asked about,as it
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data ,for deciding if the person is fully qualified for the job.
Nevertheless
, it is private
information
,which should not be
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revealed
unless the person
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permit
permits
it .
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to illustrate how it is unethical to ask for
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,
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HR usually asks for
this
to decide if
this
employee’s personal
life
is going to affect his
work
life
by asking for extra time off
as well as
holidays, for
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instance
.
To conclude
, in my humble opinion,the disadvantages of
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information
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the advantages. Asking for
this
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permission
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this
is it should be
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underlying
underlining
that
our
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it is our right to have personal
life
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in our
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professional
life
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