The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage that adults who
work
spend on different activities in a country in 1958 and 2008. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that most workers in 1958 and 2008 spend their Use synonyms
time
working, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
less
people spend Change the quantifier
fewer
time
Use synonyms
in
travelling to Change preposition
apply
work
during 1958 and 2008.
First of all, the highest percentage in 1958 was working, reaching exactly 33%. After that, 32% of the individuals spend their day sleeping which was significantly higher than going out with friends and family by approximately 12%. Use synonyms
According to
the least three percentages, they were relaxing at home, other interests or playing sports and travelling to Linking Words
work
as they stood at 8%, 6% and 2%, respectively.
By far, 42% of humans tend to Use synonyms
work
during their day in 2008. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, spending Linking Words
time
sleeping reached 25%. Use synonyms
Then
, 13% of the working individuals, which was an average ratio, spend their Linking Words
time
relaxing at home. Surprisingly, the percentage of Use synonyms
time
spent per day doing other interests or playing sports and travelling to Use synonyms
work
had the same number which was 8%. Use synonyms
Last
but not least, 6% of the Linking Words
time
was spent Use synonyms
in
going out with friends and family.Change preposition
apply
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