Tha chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan

Tha chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan
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The given chart illustrates the growing figure of japon citizens every five years until 2055
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, the table compares the over 65 years old population and the percentage of the total community between 1950 and 2055. A glance at the graphs reveals that japon society growth increased in 2005.
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the first graph, the public is falling in 2055. The japon culture steadily soared from 84.1 million to 127 billion and the community received the highest point of capacity. After following one decade, the citizen figure decreased gradually decrease to reach 125.4 million.
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the graph prediction that the populace will lose a huge statistic of citizens until 2055 which is 89.9 million nations.
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, the graph table unearths a comparison between older people and between total society. between 1950 and 2035 , the elder public rise sharply,
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there will be reached the highest sum of the geriatric nation in 2055
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, the populace will reduce significantly in the same years. in short, the Japanese elder crowd will cover the majority of the state in the future. The elder public has an effect on the unfavourable growth of people.
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