The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world.

It is thought
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some people that
English
has
been become
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widely the only international
language
those people speak around the world. Having
one
speech like
English
which is much easier than other languages, there are many benefits
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although
,
coming
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the drawbacks are noticeable. As we know,
English
has just been chosen
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international
language
for decades by the authorities and the vast majority of visitors have to speak
English
when they travel abroad for better communication with others. To thrive rapidly
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speak
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one
sound is
one
of the most crucial features
than
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understanding two or more languages.
In addition
, the increasing industry of tourism and the spread of economic systems when will be created strongly that a useful word
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connect communication between them. Another reason that must be considered is, most people are not able to learn perfectly and perceive two or more languages, so concentrating on
one
will be caused the growth of fluency and learning more vocabulary.
On the other hand
, having
one
language
is a serious threat,
due to
it is possible the basis of
English
will be changing dramatically or to will be in danger of extinction in the future.
For example
, the invasion of a foreign army to the UK can affect badly on the prose and culture and
also
the word order might be disturbed. In conclusion, I believe speaking
one
global
language
has many plus points than its disadvantages so, it is better to improve
language
skills in a specific field and not need to be concerned about what happened in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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