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The graph below shows the results of a survey on the percentage of people who drank soft drinks every day over 7 day period in 2019 in the 4 countries of the United Kingdom.

The graph below shows the results of a survey on the percentage of people who drank soft drinks every day over 7 day period in 2019 in the 4 countries of the United Kingdom.
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The table provides information about the percentage rate of
people
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 in four states in the UK who drank carbonated drinks daily, the study is done over 1 week period in the year 2019.
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, among all carbonated beverages,
Coca-cola
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 is the top choice in three countries (England, Wales, and Northern Ireland),
whereas
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,
Irn-Bru
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 is in Scotland.
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, the highest number of
people
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 who consumed in total are the Scottish
while
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 the
people
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 in Northern Ireland were the lowest. In England, a total of 40% of the correspondents drank soft drinks which places third on the rank which
coca-cola
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 accounted for the highest with 16%, followed by
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pepsi
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Pepsi
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,
fanta
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,
sprite
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, and
Irn-Bru
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 at 8%,7%,5%, and 4% respectively. In Scotland,
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,
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this
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 country has the highest percentage who drank soft drinks with 51%,
this
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 is the only country that preferred
Irn-Bru
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 (23%) to
coca-cola
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 (11%), where
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pepsi
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Pepsi
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,
fanta
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 and
sprite
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 at 7%,6%, and 4% sequentially. Meanwhile, Wales is the second most carbonated drinker with 45%. From
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 country where the most numbered correspondents choose coca- cola with 20%. Trailed behind
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pepsi
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Pepsi
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 (8%),
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fanta
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Fanta
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 (5%) and
Sprite
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 and
Irn-Bru
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 both with 6%. Northern Ireland,
on the other hand
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, is the
last
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 in place with 39% of the total. 18% of its
people
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 drank
coca-cola
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, far behind;
sprite
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 at 7%,
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pepsi
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Pepsi
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 at 5%,
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fanta
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Fanta
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%,
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Irn-Bru
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and Irn-Bru
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 at 3% which is the lowest.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, coca-cola, irn-bru, pepsi, fanta, sprite with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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