The graph below shows the results of a survey on the percentage of people who drank soft drinks every day over 7 day period in 2019 in the 4 countries of the United Kingdom.
The table provides information about the percentage rate of
people
in four states in the UK who drank carbonated drinks daily, the study is done over 1 week period in the year 2019. Overall
, among all carbonated beverages, Coca-cola
is the top choice in three countries (England, Wales, and Northern Ireland), whereas
, Irn-Bru
is in Scotland. Abeit
, the highest number of Correct your spelling
Albeit
people
who consumed in total are the Scottish while
the people
in Northern Ireland were the lowest.
In England, a total of 40% of the correspondents drank soft drinks which places third on the rank which coca-cola
accounted for the highest with 16%, followed by pepsi
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Pepsi
fanta
, sprite
, and Irn-Bru
at 8%,7%,5%, and 4% respectively. In Scotland, however
, although
this
country has the highest percentage who drank soft drinks with 51%, this
is the only country that preferred Irn-Bru
(23%) to coca-cola
(11%), where pepsi
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Pepsi
fanta
and sprite
at 7%,6%, and 4% sequentially.
Meanwhile, Wales is the second most carbonated drinker with 45%. From this
country where the most numbered correspondents choose coca- cola with 20%. Trailed behind pepsi
(8%), Change the capitalization
Pepsi
fanta
(5%) and Change the capitalization
Fanta
Sprite
and Irn-Bru
both with 6%. Northern Ireland, on the other hand
, is the last
in place with 39% of the total. 18% of its people
drank coca-cola
, far behind; sprite
at 7%, pepsi
at 5%,Change the capitalization
Pepsi
fanta
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Fanta
6
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at 6
Irn-Bru
at 3% which is the lowest.Correct word choice
and Irn-Bru
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