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These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opini

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It is undoubtedly true that most
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families are moving
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abroad for
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society
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 it is
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 approach as it will make
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life more difficult. In
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 will argue on both sides, and
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 will give my own viewpoint. There are a plethora of reasons to support
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 idea of moving abroad. The prominent factor that could be taken into account is career advancement.
This
 is because when people go and work in other nations, they are being offered
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 pay rise and promotions at the same time.
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 great opportunity for the person who wants to grow in his professional life. To exemplify, an Indian is relocating to
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 nation in order to have
a long term benefits
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Apart from
this
, the educational standards are way more improved as compared to other countries.
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education can enhance
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young people’s
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Although
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 there are some negative consequences as well that can never be neglected as well.
Firstly
, it is extremely difficult for anyone to leave their own country and settle down in
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 environment.
This
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 fact that some family members can suffer
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loneliness and
home sickness
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. To illustrate, 30 per cent of the migrants have been diagnosed
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 depression as they left their homes and families behind.
Besides
this
, some people have to face the problems like racism and
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barrier
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. In conclusion, it is irrefutable to say that moving abroad will have tremendous benefits to young people in terms of both personal and professional life,
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 the detrimental effects can never be ignored and must be addressed.
Submitted by Navneet Dhand on

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