The charts below show the percentages of the water used in different sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
water
utilized for various purposes, namely food
, service, building, household, and manufacturing, in Sydney, Australia, in 1997 and 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of water
is used for the food
industry
in two periods, while
the amount of water
required for the building industry
accounted for the least compared with others.
It is undeniable that, in 1997, the amount of water
needed for the food
industry
accounted for 48%, which was the largest proportion compared to others. During the same time frame, while
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water
consumption in manufacturing tripled that in the building industry
, there were 13% and 19% of the water
required for service and household use, respectively.
In the next ten years, the percentage of water
used in the food
industry
was not challenged, despite a slight drop of 7%. In the same year, households consumed 21% of water
, which was roughly doubled the figure in manufacturing. In terms of the remaining fields, whereas
the service industry
is composed of one-fourth of water
use, there was only 2% of the water
needed for the building industry
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