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These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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It is argued that the family who
move
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 abroad for
work
 are get up better
work
 opportunities, so that good for
their
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them
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 and for the
children
. I agree
for
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 that because
in
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these days there are lower jobs either in
public
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the public
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 or
privet
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private
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 sector. On the one hand, there are many pros for
the
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children
.
Firstly
, they
are identify
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 other
culture
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cultures
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 different
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from which
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which
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what
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 they see in
them
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the
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 country. And they
are
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meet many people from different nationalities. They are learning
new
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a new
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 language. For all those points, the
children
 are acquiring new skills and experiences.
For example
,Arbics families
are
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go to
Canda
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Canada
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. In
this
 case totally different either habits or language. All the family must
be speak
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foreign
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a foreign
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 language and
doing
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same
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the same
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 daily moment.
On the other hand
, the cons
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 family who go abroad for
work
 are the head of the family doesn’t
has
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 any knowledge
for
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to
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 face any problems. So, the
children
 can’t live in
foreign
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a foreign
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 country. Suhs as, in being if
no
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not
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 enough money how they can live and the
children
how
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now
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go
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 to school. In conclusion,
although
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for
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abroad the family for the
work
 but must choose the perfect country and
in
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 the same time suitable for the
children
 and
the
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all family from all aspects.
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