The graph below gives information about the number of jobs in four sectors of the economy in the US between 1960 and 2020.

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make

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comparisons where relevant. The president line graph illustrates us about four different categorized jobs of the

economy

in the USA in two time periods, units measured in millions. From an

overall

perspective,

it is clear that

,

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healthcare and the retail economies experienced

gradually

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increase

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without decrease until the end of the

period

.

To begin

with,

manufacturing

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the manufacturing

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economy

shows us slightly grew from 15 to 20

million

in double decades, and from 1980 to 2020 experienced

decrease

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a decrease

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and

at the end

of the

period

measures of jobs reached around 13

million

.

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The agriculture

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Agriculture

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economy

is

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started the

period

with 5.5

million

and

this

trend decreased in 1980, and until 2020 remained steady measures, approximately 3

million

. Retail and healthcare economies started the

period

with

dramatically

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increase, and

this

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trends

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stabilized until

in

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2020, and

also

their units stayed

same

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the same

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measures, around 15

million

.

While

retail

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the retail

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economy

started with 5

million

, and agriculture began

nearly

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with nearly

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3

million

.