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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, there are many countries that offer military
services
 as a compulsory thing to do for young
men
 and women after they finish from school. But I strongly disagree with
this
 idea because of many reasons that will be discussed later in
this
 essay. In the first hand, if the country decided to make military
services
 as a must activity for young
men
then
 they will not be able to do some
further
 studies or experience work from a young age.
Also
, young
people
 should have the chance to build their future after they graduate from school by working.
For example
: if the adult graduated from school and went to military
services
 directly
then
 he or she won't have the experience of working and studying something from there interest. In the other hand, Military
services
 should be optional for these adults and not to take it as a compulsory service to do. Because
people
's interest differs from each other, for some
people
 they like to refuge to military
services
 and continue until they meet their goal.
Such
 as: some young
men
 like to go to military
services
 as reason to join military in the future, but others like to study more or work in a certain job. In conclusion, there is a wide variety of
people
 with different opinions about military
services
, whether to make military
services
 compulsory in their country or to make it optional for young
men
 and women.
Moreover
, it is always better to make these kinds of
services
 optional.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Compulsory
  • Military service
  • Conscription
  • Patriotism
  • National security
  • Social equality
  • Discipline
  • Physical fitness
  • Life skills
  • Job training
  • Infringement
  • Conscripts
  • Gender equality
  • Mandatory
  • Economy
  • Education system
  • Labor market
  • Civil service
  • Alternative forms
  • Balanced view
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