You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words. 

Writing Task 1
The bar charts present the proportion of men and women who perform various household chores in a particular country. It
also
shows how much
time
is allotted to each
task
by both sexes.
Overall
, it is evident that a large majority of the male and female population are mainly involved in cooking and spend most of their
time
on
this
task
on a daily basis. About 60% of men do the cooking and usually take an hour of their
time
on
this
task
every day. Cleaning came in second when 40% of
this
gender dedicated a good 45
minutes
to accomplish it. Approximately 20% of males
also
take the
time
to care for their pets and do some house repairs as they allotted roughly 20
minutes
and 5
minutes
for these activities, respectively.
On the other hand
, 80% of the population who cooks at home are women and they usually spend more than 80
minutes
per day on
this
specific
task
.
While
roughly 60% of females do the cleaning for more than an hour, 20% of them still managed to pamper their pets for at least 20
minutes
. Some women, despite how few in number, are even able to save a tidbit of their
time
doing house repairs. In conclusion, among all tasks, individuals from both genders spend most of their
time
preparing meals
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, task, minutes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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