It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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two effective ways of

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. The first reason would be about the effect of good and bad ways on their futures because

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one stupid and wrong

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might change their life.

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more time at clubs and bars can lead the person to be alcoholic and just

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fun for the moment. Do, these paths can make or hurt our futures

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Furthermore

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when they make a

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for them and will keep it in their mind.

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a bad mark and teacher will punish

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class and it can be an experience.

Hence

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punishments

can give some experiences to individuals. The first

punishment

is about not allowing children

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out by

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them how much a

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they make a

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a bad GPA because

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that not allow to spend time out. So,

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punishment

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can show them how important is their

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the teacher

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teacher

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can punish students

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their own ways and the first

way

is by having a lot of work to do at home because

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this

case they can feel and illustrate it.

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, teachers can give them homework to make them practice.

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, giving a lot of tasks to do by professors is the best

way

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punishment

. In conclusion,

punishments

are a good

way

to learn the

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between bad and good following

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two reasons,

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is that, it can

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on future and the second is

getting

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experience.

In addition

,

punishments

like not

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children go out by

parents

and

also

giving a lot of

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to study

by

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teachers.